Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Sunder: Day 28

Not much to report tonight.  I'm (mostly) happy with the elaborations I made to the first three chapters. 

As I was making notes, I kept forgetting place names in The Wheel, which speaks to a larger need to pin down its interior layout (district names, transit line names, agricultural areas, business districts, public buildings, etc.) so that the story will have a sense of place as Colbrit and Charlotte move around.  I can work on some of that tomorrow night.

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